Our ideas moved around the topics of mental health and fitness. We also decided to include the influence of social media on this. I wrote the script based on my own experience of insecurity in comparison to online influencers. I wanted the insecurity of the character to be a universally relatable thing so opening the idea up to the group helped the idea grow. We decided to aim it towards self-acceptance with elements of humour to keep attention whilst still incorporating a serious message. After we had settled on the main thematical focus we moved on to character design.
We felt simple characterisations would be the best way to go and the most fun and so we went for a flat design for the character. Alex Nessia came up with the overall character design and was responsible for the illustrations. I helped with the final colour choices for the characters.
The story went through a lot of changes before we were all happy with it. We felt that the initial story had too many elements to it, confusing the message we wanted to convey so we decided to scrap the clock scenes (see storyboard). We also realised that the bodybuilding element was dominating the story more than intended and obscuring the intended message. We recieved feedback from the peer review crit that we had made something geard towards a young men. This wasn’t our original intention but after some discussion we decided as a group to follow this path.